Black Poetry : The Lubrication of Life

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by alyce, May 22, 2001.

  1. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "laughter is the lubrication of life"

    that's what he said

    and then there was the time when
    they'd finished making love
    that

    well

    he just BUSTED UP

    str8 FELL OUT

    just ROLLED
    all over the bed
    kickin the covers
    wavin his hands


    had her feeling

    self-conscious at first

    (yes, it had been good, but...)


    she was still feelin
    the tinglin itch
    he created deep inside

    and there he was, over there
    just

    LAFFIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    but he looked sooo stupid!
    and he looked sooo crazy....
    arms and legs flailin

    she watched him,
    sitting up on her knees

    just enjoyin himself

    and he looked so happy
    and he looked so cute...

    tears were rollin down his face
    by now

    he was almost hyper-ventilatin

    and he looked so good....
    and he looked so sexy...

    she leaned over him, a smile
    deepenin in the spot he had
    just touched so well

    and cradled his body in her
    embrace...rolling over
    and over as his joy
    became hers


    ....ready for another lube job...


    alyce, 2001
     
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    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    Destee jumping up and down
    and SCREAMING ~~~~~~~~~~~> :jumping: :jumping:

    only you Alyce
    A-Leeeeeeece
    only you could do this !

    Awesome Gurl!!!

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Alyce,

    Ya know I'm diggin' this lubed up flow right??? :lol:

    :heart: ya Queen!!!
    GQ
     
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    mojo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeah!

    you make a brotha wanna go back home and get his lube on ~ one mo gan!

    Paint the picture poet! :D


    mojo
     
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    T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I like what you did with this one, sis! Seems like the combination of loving and laughter work wonders! :wink:

    T
     
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    i love this.
    but my husband got made the last time i got the giggles
    in the middle of my lube job...
    i was just so happy!
    -7 :spinstar:
     
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    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ms. A

    I was glued to readin bout the lube. I throughly enjoyed this flow as I do all your works. Imma hafta try this here and see what happens;)
     
  8. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    regular maintenance, y'all

    I pray we all know the ecstatic joy of loving someone ~ and that we 'laugh' often!

    peace! :D

    a
     
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