Quiet Poetry Lounge : The Loving Places

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Heartbeat, Apr 30, 2001.

  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ~For my heaven on earth~

    Come with me to the loving places
    Where sunshine can rest on our smiling faces
    A place where time for us will stand still
    Come with me angel
    Please say that you will

    Loving places
    Grass covered spaces
    Places picked by the stars up above
    Perfect places for you and I
    Where we go together
    Where we make love

    In less than an instant
    Puff, we are there
    Your hand in mine
    So much in love
    Without a care

    Here amoung the familar mundane
    Our love is stiffeled
    **** such a waste
    Only fulfilled in a loving place
    A place for lovers
    Seeking to be free
    The only place it seems
    For you and for me

    BE
     
  2. alyce

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    B.e E.ver (wonderful....EW&F!)

    these heights
    and climes
    we reach
    together
    bending
    eternity
    exploring
    forever

    it happens
    instantaneously
    i look at you
    you smile at me

    the loving
    began before
    our birth
    and found us
    bound us
    here on earth

    we lived
    we learned
    we journeyed apart
    ever growing
    the yearning
    inside
    "one" heart

    the drawing
    the pulling
    the gravity
    of fate
    of this
    "one" destiny

    and blessed
    joy adorns
    these faces
    our souls
    fulfilled
    in
    loving
    places....


    yeah :)

    a
     
  3. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    thank you both for these loving places

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    just awesomely sweet in da places of love
     
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    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SMOOTHE RICH,JUST SMOOTHE....FLOW ON MY MAN
     
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    Very nice one to bring back Rich. Those loving places sound devine.
     
  7. Auroraflower

    Auroraflower Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautifull.....



    yes visionised it....
    beautifull....



    what makes a poem beautifull and powerfull..


    it is when there is a emotion behind it that is based on realness and truth and love (life)



    i like youre work..keep writting poet...










    loveauroraflower:heart:
     
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