Black Poetry : The Loving Places

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  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ~For my heaven on earth~

    Come with me to the loving places
    Where sunshine can rest on our smiling faces
    A place where time for us will stand still
    Come with me angel
    Please say that you will

    Loving places
    Grass covered spaces
    Places picked by the stars up above
    Perfect places for you and I
    Where we go together
    Where we make love

    In less than an instant
    Puff, we are there
    Your hand in mine
    So much in love
    Without a care

    Here amoung the familar mundane
    Our love is stiffeled
    **** such a waste
    Only fulfilled in a loving place
    A place for lovers
    Seeking to be free
    The only place it seems
    For you and for me

    BE
     
  2. T

    T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ohhhhhh wow....

    you've said it all here, BE....yes. Smiling eyes are filled with tears, fo sho! :D

    T
     
  3. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey

    thanks for that glass of water.





    One
     
  4. honeyluv

    honeyluv Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    a lovin place of u and i
    a place to trace our face
    in this place our love flow
    as my honey drips and watch
    u grow.....in the green grass
    of still blue water my love
    yo love is taken higher...
    thank u for taking me there in
    the love place of u ....ummmmmmm! BE....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    A BEAUTIFUL PLACE OF LOVE
    BE..... YA ON POINT AND WOOWEEEEE!!
    FLOW ON BRUTHA
     
  6. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BE,

    Felt this fella!!!

    Peace
    GQ
     
  7. raheem

    raheem Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    so good

    when you get it, have it, and keep it like that.

    str8


    r
     
  8. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes,

    Feelin this my bro. Loving your poetry. You go ahead bro~ Sorry for the mistake Peace.
    Desert Storm
     
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