Quiet Poetry Lounge : The love that was

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by sahara heart, Oct 22, 2003.

  1. sahara heart

    sahara heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am so sorry for loving you
    Never knew just how much you would love me back
    We were happy together
    Until youstarted stressin' me
    Why you gotta go and start telling me
    I dont love you
    Yeah, it was a joke at first
    But two years later
    for you to tell me i dont love you?

    we weren't on the smae page
    I couldnt deal with it anymore
    I wanted to be happy and happiness for me
    Was loving you
    And knowing that you knew
    But you didnt
    So I wasnt happy
    So I left you

    Call me selfish but that wasnt my idea of love
    It was more of an obsession
    And I wasnt down with that
    You havent called or written
    Now do you think that you love me?
    If you ever did, wouldnt you try?

    Destee members you feel me?

    Havent heard from brutha man in almost 5 months
    And i guess i'm hurtin but i'm movin' on
    Readin' this, i feel, maybe he was the one that never loved me
    Maybe it was never love at all
    Maybe I was fooled
    But I know that I know that I'm happy
    Without you!

    I have found true love which moves me
    From the darkness you left me
    And now the beautiful light of love
    That shines on me
    Is more than enough to keep me going.

    :heart:
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    da feelin of love in new direction
    this was well felt
    enough emotions flowin here
    to make u fly low .....very nice scribe
     
  3. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whoa, this is deep and heart felt. I am so glad you have the strength to shine, girl. Gwan with yaself. :)
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    woooooo emotions flowin...nice flow
     
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