Quiet Poetry Lounge : The Love That Was There(4mysis)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Heartbeat, Mar 20, 2001.

  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Love ran through you
    Giving you new Life
    The only love that could do this
    Was the love that was there
    A love that ran through you
    With kindness and care

    The so-called experts
    Did their professional best
    But the love that was there
    Took care of the rest
    True love of the serious, historical kind
    Easing every fear that entered your mind

    The real love was there
    Waiting for the cue
    To give love and life
    To the soul of you
    The heart of you
    For all you are
    For all you do

    It was love that ran through you
    Sterlized instraments were hardly needed
    With the kind of love you recieved
    Anything can be defeated
    The future awaits you
    Your life you can share
    Share with the love
    That was already there

    BE
     
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    T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BE

    again, words like "thank you" and "I appreciate" will never convey the feelings flowing through me right now. A sista can't lose with all THIS love.

    You are worth your weight in all the world's priceless gems, and then some.

    sisTer
     
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    this is beautiful BE
    made me think of those last days with my Mother
    it was the love that carried us thru
    that took us there
    to her future
    to my future

    thank you for this

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man BE.....

    this piece took me back home
    see i've learned to love words
    u speak of .......jst beautiful man !
     
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    James Eta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    there is no doubt

    how special this is. How unforgettable, this kind of love and sacrifice.

    thank you for this

    J
     
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    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    JE...You know how we do.

    BE
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this what love is all about right here .......
     
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