Black Poetry : The Love Juice

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Mr marion, Aug 17, 2001.

  1. Mr marion

    Mr marion Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Slowly it drips like 1 2 3
    A whole day of drippin saves no love for me
    If I was to turn it- I could probably save the
    day.
    If I still loved you it wouldn't drip away
    slowly it drips like 1 2 3
    A whole day of drippin saves no lovin for me
    my baby is cheating and so is me....
     
  2. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mr. Marion,

    Hella fun flow bro!

    Peace
    GQ
     
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    This piece

    brings so many things to mind ~ so many. I must applaud you...I heard the music in this song. This sista loves the kind of lyrical magic that produces the sound of music!

    thank you

    a
     
  4. Mr marion

    Mr marion Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    laughing O L ....
    thanks yall., I actually wrote a very nice poem.. A client came in and I had to exit the system. I came back and I lost the entire poem. This is what came out my head there after.....
     
  5. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    yo

    when that client comes in hit that save button man, well i hear ya
    so what's the next move man


    DSSNY
     
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