Poetry Critiques : The Love Debate

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Spirit2All, Dec 29, 2008.

  1. Spirit2All

    Spirit2All Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    L-O-V-E.

    What does it mean?
    When do we know it?
    How is it seen?
    Can we still show it?
    Vibes to be played with?
    Something to own?
    Risk being hurt
    Or stay safe alone?

    Tender heart
    Can I ransom you?
    Take a chance on you
    Being safe this time?

    Will he always be mine?
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    each stanza kiss the next that makes this so perfect
    great piece of work
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Straight to the point, do we really know for sure, we risk so much to step out on faith. I can certainly relate to this poetess, well done.
     
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    Lloyd Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i really want to know it,really
     
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