Black Poetry : The Lost World

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  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The Lost World

    Was the World ever Lost?
    I ponder this question
    Then I found the Answer
    It was Me.

    Scientist search and tell Us
    They found a Lost World
    They haven’t found Atlantis

    They haven’t seen my Girl
    That is the only World
    I Want and Need

    So find her Mr. Scientist
    Dig Deeper
    Relieve this grief

    I feel ever since
    That girl went away
    Dig deeper Mr. Archaeologist:help:

    Find some common ground
    More dirt is in the way

    When you spot Her
    Give her this note
    It confesses how I feel
    In it I am explaining how
    I know what we had was Real

    She may not want
    to speak to me again
    I hope she is open
    To us being more than friends:couple:

    I hope she even entertains

    The thought of me
    Wanting her time

    Her life with mine
    To be the explored

    Her and me Together
    I hope is the one that they find
    Next time they explore
    Looking for Lost Worlds.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow...man you hitting smooth and deep ya pen on fire HODEE
     
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    Oh, my Lord! Somebody, PLEASE, pass me some tissue!
     
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    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this right here was madd poetic..I liked how it flowed..
    I hope you find your lost world..
    we all lose ours at times...
    when that happens you find create and form new ones...

    you cant truly know love without having a love lost...

    ya dig

    thanks for the read
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My goodness brother Hodee, this felt oh so genuine, like the words poured from your soul. This made my heart wince poet...wow!
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    ssshhhh

    i hope she read this man

    your love is evident

    keep working man because you may not find that "lost" world

    but there are other "worlds" out there i know it's not the same

    but you know what i'm sayin'

    peace

    and you know i'm feeling you brethren trust me i do
     
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    mos def pulled the heart strings on this jone
    apt analogies could even melt a heart of stone.....

    one love
    khasm
     
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