Black Poetry : The loss

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  1. ox_6

    ox_6 Member MEMBER

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    The Loss

    The day you left
    my heart dropped
    The day you left
    my righteousness hurt
    The day you left
    all meaning was something that i didnt want to embrace
    The day you left
    sympathy felt like arrows of guilt
    The day you left
    Love just doesnt live here anymore
    The day you left

    The Loss
     
  2. Twofish

    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the day I left
    I know I left you yearning for more
    but see I went
    becuz there's a whole world I had to explore
    it won't negate
    the Love I have 4 you, cuz you know it's real
    but life is change
    flipped a new page, but it won't change how I feel
    I had to go
    but you should know if Love resides it will be
    please remember
    it's GOD'S LOVE ALWAYS THAT WILL SET YOU FREE

    {Nice to meet you...I just was inspired by this and I had to respond :)...Many Blessings}

    1luv
    2fish
    PEACE STRENGTH UNITY JOY SUCCESS LOVE
     
  3. ox_6

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    thanks, we're good together lets form an alliance and express those powerful meanings of the not understood yet.
    what do you say?
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    da day u left
    without goodbye
    da day i left
    no mo lies

    embrace of fate
    be no more
    yet true love
    from above caressing
    my heart like a glove

    da lost of silent hope
    in da stilliness of night
    da day u left
    came down a light
    now i know
    false love gone
    yet here all alone ......flow on ! ox_6
     
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    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    that's right ox...UNITY IS KEY

    Keep Scribin!
     
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