Black Poetry : the long and short of it

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  1. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the long and short of it

    the short of it is...

    that 'it' just is
    and ain't much that us can do about it

    i guess in retrospect
    love's like--
    much ado about what you do that
    amounts to--
    virtually whatever love makes you feel like
    because
    the long and short of it is that

    'it's' long and short.

    the life of love that is.
    .
    ...
    .....
    the long of it is
    that
    longing
    that
    wanting that needing eternally internally
    the
    thought that that
    significant he or she
    be the missing piece, the master key...
    filling you
    increasing your worth
    intrinsically
    extrinsically
    universally
    you exude and disburse these
    conjoined streams of euphoria
    creating this
    polypeptide chain of loving memories
    covalently bonded
    with romantisicm
    she is this
    broken record
    that keeps skipping in your mind
    and you don't mind because
    in your mind

    she's all that matters...
    before during and after it all

    see...
    the long of it is...

    everytime you meet it seems...

    too
    short.

    (wanting her)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ahhhhhh yes this was tyte u been missed
    ya flow bring delight to the page
     
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    tyte drop. i likes. like how u incorporated bio into the flow. cute. much love :)
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    that was nice..
    i loved the long of it
    and the short of it..
    the long of rhythm
    and the staccato too
    very nice...
     
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    Really diggin this.
     
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