Black Poetry : the lonely guy

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by jamesfrmphilly, Oct 30, 2005.

  1. jamesfrmphilly

    jamesfrmphilly going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    i'm a really lonely guy
    i go through my day with a tear in my eye

    just one, no more
    i will "man up", that's for sure

    but inside, my heart is shades of blue
    because, my darling, i miss u
     
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    *rubbing my eyes* Is that JamesfrmPhilly, up here in the poetry forum? Wow... Well James, I think that this was a truly heartfelt piece. So many have been in this place before, and you described it so well. :)
     
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    Wow.. james..Expressing his feelings so genuinely! I see theres a poet in all of us, just know that your never alone in the the world... there are ppl here just waiting for you to tell them you that u want their company.. lets share a word or two.
     
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    i see poetry in everybody
    even a tear in one's eye
    when one become a lonely guy
    missing her he cry..................

    very nicely expressed bruh..
     
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    ahhh you got me acting mushy right now flow on my brother
     
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    wow...da brotha that despises poets drops a heartfelt joint...
    wonders never cease...

    nice one man...
    one love
    khasm
     
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    the lady who received the poem says she will be over to my place by wendsday........ :slobber:
     
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    Nice flow James. It worked for Romeo.. why not you? Was it the one tear drop or the I miss you part that got her?

    Hope to see more flow from you.
     
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    U r mister lonely,so lonely,u have nobody,to call ur own nooooooooooo!!!!Itz hard men,our lifes is empty without that chick!!!Who will take care of us,soothe us when in pain,give us a reason to fight,encourage us?I wonder.
    Go back to bruh J. his baby,wherever u r.
    Nice flow
     
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    Nice Poem!
     
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