Black Poetry : The Little Things….

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  1. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes the little things in life
    mean the most to me
    Like receiving a message saying
    good morning, how are you

    The smiles you manage to place
    upon my face all through the day
    Or how when I am not around you
    thoughts of you fill my brain space

    Sometimes wishing I could see your face
    at that very moment at that very second
    replaying our conversations and feeling
    a happiness inside that makes me close my eyes
    and get lost in my thoughts of you

    Da*n I just hate that circumstances
    will not allow us to explore
    Our possible fate go out on date
    spend some time just hanging out
    Too much is at stake….

    But the thoughts alone are enough right now
    they keep mind in a beautiful place
    I always seem to want the very things
    I cannot have, and now you’re
    One of those precious things

    That makes me shine and glitter
    like a brand new diamond ring
    Knowing that my presence
    makes your heart gleam

    I find myself thinking of you
    and then wanting to sing
    A sweet love song or rap a fly beat
    that causes me to tap my feet
    and twist my hips

    Then I imagine I’m alone with you
    and you kiss my glossy lips
    Pull me close, hold my body tight
    I melt like chocolate in your hands
    and wish you could lick them clean
    So you could get a taste of me
    and savior the passion and steam

    Unfortunately our paths have crossed
    at the wrong time and the wrong place
    But that does not mean our friendship is a waste

    Here and now might not be a good time
    for you or for me
    But we never know what tomorrow may bring
    So in the mean while I just wanted you to know
    How much I enjoy all those little things
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Little things means the most sweet nothings and upmost
    tiny joyful whispers of thy voice and the small touchies
    wit rapid smiles that will go many miles yes i know what u mean
    and the thoughts through da day have the mind at mental play .

    I enjoyed this that made me think back in time some......
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wrong time, wrong place, that can happen sometimes. But, when someone's glimmer brightens your day, that is a special feeling indeed. Beautiful write poetess.
     
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    Hi 4EVERLUV
    Wow this poem is just so beautiful
    I enjoyed the tenderness and softness
    of each line, and how you
    made your point with so
    much heart
    the importances of the little things.
    The simples things, and time
    will tell more..much love
    awesome flow sis

    Peace~N~Love
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    In other words...Little Things ...are price-less!!

    Don't buy me a rock that's bigger than my hand,
    I'd much rather run barefoot with you in the sand.

    Don't need no fur coat, to make me glow ...
    Just pick up the phone and say ...Hello

    Give me a wink, from across the room,
    send a note saying you'll be home soon.

    At the end of your day, you run to my door,
    plant a kiss on my lips like never before.


    Make plans to meet, at six on the dot,
    Those very little things, to me ...mean a lot!!

    surely I can relate, awesome write sis.​
     
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    Sha'iyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awww

    oh, i didn't know it was like this, 4everluv. i like you too. :em2300:
    nah, 4real, 4real... this was some fiire! i loved the way you played with the flow and let that descriptive foreplay with the pen (key) take over. you got it goin' on.
     
  7. LovesDestiny

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    Wow! 4everluv...this was simply OFF THE CHAIN!!!! I found me in every word of your piece...I keep reading it over and over again!!!! Thank you for such an eloquent depiction of how good life is when we can appreciate the little things.
     
  8. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$:
    Your sweet words of kindness mean
    oh so much. Yes, the little things
    go so far. I knew you would truly
    understand my flow. Thank you ever so
    much.


    watz:
    Sad but its true....but I so appreciate
    the things he do. Sometimes people
    come into your life for just a reason
    even if that reason is only to put a
    smile on your face and in your heart.
    Thank you so much for the read.


    Bluewater:
    You are too sweet and too kind
    I'm so happy you enjoy my flo
    Just thinkn' through my pen.
    Thanks again for the luv.


    queent:
    Your flo back was AWESOME!!!
    I see you really can relate
    Priceless...yes indeed
    Thank you beautiful sista


    Hopelis:
    Your words made me smile.
    I am too touched. Thank you
    for the visit and the luv


    Sha'iyn:
    And you know I like you too....:qqb018:
    4real...4real....
    Thank you sweetie, I always
    get tickled when you comment on
    my pen because yours is so AMAZING!!!



    Much luv to you all
     
  9. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    the little things help

    but who's knows "when the right time is"

    and will there ever be one?

    man don't waste time

    it can't get it back

    go on and enjoy yours

    if you can fight thru it together

    there's so much power in that

    only if the other person is with you and real about it

    peace
     
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