Black Poetry : the light at the end of the tunnel

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by ballerSon, Nov 26, 2011.

  1. ballerSon

    ballerSon Member MEMBER

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    In a place of darkness, even with the brightest of light unable to see
    My head hangs down low feeling as everyone is against me
    "Look at him thats the boy that tried to take his life, he is such a failure he couldnt even get that right"
    Drowning in a lake of misery and self pity, praying God if you love me just send me an angel
    He must of heard me just as i was about to give up a woman so beautiful reaches out her hand
    Pulling me into the light to stand proudly again

    She looked at me and smiled, "hey did you do the homework last night?
    Her beauty rendered me speechless, i wondered why i never noticed her before
    But the stain of past relationships had me blinded no more.
    Her touch ever so gentle and embracing I felt as if I was wrapped Gods arms
    From that moment it was certain that she would be the one
    Not even Hurricane Katrina could damage our path
    Now six years later just the taught of her still put a smile on my face
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BallerSon, you will be a complete success.
    Your warrior spirit shall take no prisoners.
     
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    Well i thank you and hopefully with my dads help ill publish in a few years
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    completely awesome
    love the pose of your structure ya indeed on your way
    ya creativity is unbound keep flowin brother
     
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    Thank you for the encouragement
     
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