Black Poetry : The Letter

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I should not have written
    it wasn't da tyme to write
    to open my body, mind to
    light i needed my space
    to fulfill all these dreams
    and let go all as it seems
    my love is da moment of
    hope and a heart never to
    joke i smoke on the day of
    everlasting a desire of deep
    passion which fatal my joy
    is a legend as i pen da true
    essence of love , written
    should i have left it a secret
    it would have spool in it's
    present but it was sent from
    heavenly above to spread
    for real da depth of a heart
    journey out into past pain
    and new found reasons
    once awaken from da slumber
    finding it still remain empty
    like a sea shell with whispers
    from da ocean despair
    when i peep through da
    window i see u not there
    i shouldn't have written
    for all da past and pain all my
    days ahead and the depth of
    my lovin heart left in dancing
    ink of multi colors of a rainbow
    anguishly the words spend
    together in jumbo jackin jock
    mistakenly taken
    dis would be absurd
    the ink on the paper does so
    hold the keys to enter
    this new letter , this one sheet
    written from thy handz
    thy mind and feelings
    is my standard inner strength
    to survive
    i keep searching for the heart
    of steel brings me a certain
    tomorrow as i toss da treasure
    into my slumber dreams
    da sorrow of my inner voice
    speaks soft like da whispering
    windz as thunder mumble above
    gasping for breath of hope
    when i'm set to give in da deep
    peace cry upon da grounds
    my love & heart can't relax to
    rest from da castle of sand built
    upon land but strong to uphold
    da walls until da tlde flowz
    through my handz there is no
    doctor to fix a vulnerable heart
    only words to live by i write
    these scripts to dis letter
    but let me not be the :gossip: er
    :zipit:
    but do :callme: Da Letter.
     
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    sometimes u just have to
    free yourself through the
    words that are written...
    if it flows from you...
    it was meant to be...
    no way...could you have held it
    and if they look deep enough
    the answers are always there
    no...misinterpretation to the heart
    to which the words are written for
    ...they will always know
    ...when the letter is meant for them

    Nice work...poet
    I feel you...
    Sage
     
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    thank u so much Sage u help me see more clear
    and feel the need as it was written ...i love your reply sis.
     
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    very deep and open scribe..feeling you on dis
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    thankz Angel it was one to help understand why and who
    from the pen i scribe what i can't understand and what i
    see in vision , motion and hear .
     
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    Yes, sage did put it very well indeed. Why hold the words in? Why hold the feelings back? A person knows what is meant for them, deep down, and is holding the words close to their heart I'm sure. I know I would....
     
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    Follow your heart, baby doll. Whatever's meant to happen will happen - embrace and don't force. This is a beautiful flow. Much love, sweetheart.
     
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    thankz watz sometime the written word speaks louder

    thankz gempis i will continue to let da ink speak
     
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    :terrific: :terrific: :terrific: :terrific: :terrific: :terrific: :terrific: :terrific: enough said!!!
     
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    big thankz THEONE ya words mean a lot when u visit my flow thankz
     
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