Black Poetry : The Let Down

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by DA GYMRAT, Jan 29, 2003.

  1. DA GYMRAT

    DA GYMRAT Member MEMBER

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    Please forgive my awkward stare
    And, if you would, my hesitation
    I never have been comfortable
    In this type of situation
    Conversation? Sure...
    Where should we start
    I have a pretty open mind
    But, can't say the same for my heart
    No worries,
    Every subject is fair game
    Please, just don't stop smiling
    I've never seen one quite the same
    Your eyes kinda freak me out
    The way they draw me in
    And make me uncontrollably grin
    As if I'm on the verge of sin
    This is uncharted territory
    But I can't fight the urge to keep going
    I can't remember the last time
    I experienced conversation flowing
    You've already hooked my mind
    My body isn't far behind
    Would you care to dance?
    I promise not to grind
    Why not? I swear I'm a perfect gentleman
    What's the harm in one dance
    Is it my breath? My shoes?
    Or the bulge inside my pants?
    I really am digging you, lady
    You could actually be the one
    I swear that you'll be mine
    Before the night is done
    One chance is all I ask...
    Who do you keep looking at?
    Are your friends calling you?
    Oh, it's some other cat
    WHY DIDN'T YOU TELL ME EARLIER!!!?
    No, I'm cool, just a little humiliated
    Who am I kidding, this sucks
    I'm nothing short of devistated
    So close yet so far away
    Seems to be the story of my life
    I meet the woman of my dreams
    And she's some other brother's wife
    :(
     
  2. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome...

    to the house of Destee...

    Your plight certainly SUCKS!!! :lol:

    :peace:
    GQ
     
  3. OLMEC

    OLMEC Active Member MEMBER

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    LOL GQ

    love the "flat foot" flow boss!

    holla atcha BOY!

    OLMEC
    Renaissance Representative!

    PEACE!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome within

    welcome to da playground of Destee's place
    welcome wit da flow u sho
    welcome within upon family & friendz
    ya vibe u scribe of reality bliss
    man i dig dis......welcome :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :eek:
     
  5. Ladysoul

    Ladysoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i agree with everyone else. nice piece and welcome!
     
  6. Sista Steele

    Sista Steele Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was walking in sand barefooted goooood!

    Very nice.
     
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