Black Poetry : The Lesson of Fire

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  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Enjoy the fire
    Be tantalized by its unstructured flame
    But know when the fire gets too hot
    Then you'll never have to ask
    Should the fire remain?
    There's a sense of enjoyment
    When playing with fire
    The heat feels good
    Perhaps even warming a supressed desire
    Feeling even better at a distance
    Like enjoying the beauty of Tigers for instance
    But fire does not discriminate
    That's why it's a lesson children learn
    Play with fire
    And you will be burned

    BE
     
    Heartbeat, Mar 2, 2001
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  2. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was HOT
     
    Nita, Mar 2, 2001
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    yes

    if we make the decision to take fire into our bossoms, we will get burned...

    food for thought, BE
    thank you

    A
     
    alyce, Mar 2, 2001
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    BE ... you make a gurl wanna strike a match!

    this peace is HOT ~~~~~> :blob fire:

    :)

    Destee
     
    Destee, Mar 5, 2001
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  5. cela

    cela Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hmmmmm

    I've read this piece over a few times, Heartbeat. And it reads the same: "Warning".

    You are a clever one. :)

    CELA
     
    cela, Mar 7, 2001
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    I'm with CELA

    teach!

    B
     
    belahni, Mar 7, 2001
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Red Alert of deep fire
    a lesson learned here
     
    $$RICH$$, Oct 16, 2005
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Fire can burn, but it also keeps us warm. Decisions, decisions, huh? Tight write.
     
    watzinaname, Oct 16, 2005
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