Black Poetry : The Left??

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  1. eternal

    eternal Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I looked over to the left. Like what I see.
    But I didn't touch me.
    Could've, but with no need
    cause the man to my right was full of greed
    And would've felt envy
    If I had taken the lead instead of letting my man
    not threatened by it, for the life of him just wouldn't understand
    Would not understand why I did not invite his hand
    To get intimate with my unmentionables
    Would've even found it incomprehensable
    So I reached over with my left
    Caressed his chins clef
    Found his family's wealth
    And massaged his jewels with my palm.
    Made him grasp me in his arms
    Kiss my peaks, my lips my mouth
    Taking two different paths to respective souths
    Shivering as if cold in the fire of the night
    Made my man feel good, feel right
    Kiss away my thoughts of a familiar hand touching me
    To fondled by the fantasy of foreign object learning 'bout me
    Glancing again to the left, touched myself
    Watched my man gasp for his own breath.

    then I woke up...hand in the wrong spot...I'm hot , it's 3 o'clock.
    DAyum. steamy wet dreamin.:kiss:
     
  2. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ha ha ha

    cute!
    U too funny gurl
    Ha ha ha
    ( I looked ova to da left)
    Ha ha ha
    "she's got thee urge!"
    just kidding! hee hee
    Nice poem
    Couldn't resist reading this one.
    Desert Storm
     
  3. eternal

    eternal Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you much, I'm still laughin' too!!!
    lol
    Eternal
     
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    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeah

    immediately I thought of tweet
    bad gurllll!
    ha ha ha
    Sincerely,
    Desert Storm
     
  5. eternal

    eternal Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol lol lol
    Thanks for the read poet!
    E
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I LOVED THIS ONE FOR SURE!

    ABSOLUTELY DELIGHTFUL!
    AND YET SOMEHOW INSIGHTFUL!
    LOOKS LIKE SOMEONE HAD THERE
    HANDS FULL...
    sorry! Couldn't resist to add a poetic twist!:eek:
     
  7. eternal

    eternal Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    No problem, dreams will have you poetically twistin, turnin, and all of that...lol
    Thanks for the response!!!
    Eternal
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    feeling ya poet on the left

    dss
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    SEE U HAD TO HIT MY FUNNY BONE WIT DIS HERE
    YA DONE MADE ME FALL OUT DIS HERE SEAT !!!!
    LMAO!!!!!!
     
  10. eternal

    eternal Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Repost for me
     
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