Black Poetry : The Last Word

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  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THE LAST WORD
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    Haven't we discussed
    Being hurt in the past
    Pains one can't forget
    When the lovin' don't last

    Needing love I'm cast
    In the sunshine we had
    Heeding love we're asked
    For the good with the bad

    Our feelings want trust
    Emotions so true...
    Love to the letter,
    Expressed by you

    Demonstrating care,
    In the drama we share
    That is why I dare ~
    All them haters out there

    Gotta find the right type
    To move you my dears
    A satisfying touch might
    Impress the tyte here

    Love keeps its promise;
    Always, has the last word
    In the end all lovers...
    Hear what we poets heard



    1poetsought ~ copyright 2003
     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm really feelin' this....good job
     
  3. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LovelyGoldenOne,

    Thank you, for your gracious comments-

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    Cindy, I agree wholeheartedly. Your input as always, is most insightful-

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    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    xactly...i feel u, on that. keep on scribin', poet.
     
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    LISTERSCRIBIN'

    Thanks, anytime you wanna have a joint/meeting of the mind
    on a peace, I'm down-

    1poetsought ~
     
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