Black Poetry : THE LAST SUPPER (READY FOR MORE?)

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  1. PoeticManifesta

    PoeticManifesta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You look at me and moisten your lips,
    hungry for what lies between my thighs,
    following the folds of my lips with your tounge,
    my mind wanders, to visions of you penetrating my soul.
    the everincreasing sounds intensify, as i moan in my delight.
    The symphony of passion is music to our ears
    in the middle of the night.
    As you grind your face deeper within my delacatessen.
    You breifly look up over the curve of my belly,
    and mountains of my breast.
    Just to catch a peek at my expression,
    the view you see ...is pure extacy.
    After devouring my innermost soul,
    and I savoring your karma,
    from which it was expelled into my mouth,
    turning my ora a passionate red,
    I get real dizzy, the room feels like a sauna..
    as you work your tounge.
    Bringing me to pure nirvana,
    We are now one, a bit of me in you.. and
    you in I.
    Yin and Yang it is no lie,
    without one,
    the other would just die.
    How could you not love me?
    Want to be with me,
    and or possibly marry me?
    I guess its not all put.. just that simply.
    All these thoughts and more,
    run through my mind times three.
    How could i not love you?
    Why do you do this to me?
    We cant keep doing this!
    That was the last supper,
    now count your blessings.
     
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    AHMOSE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    First of all PoeticManifesta I want to welcome you to destee.com

    I enjoyed reading this continue to keep us on fire. Im hungry for more I dont know about nobody else. :welldone:
     
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    welcome to destee.com
    enjoyed your flow...
    looking forward to reading more of u

    Please do join us in voice chat as well
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    peace
    Angel
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Seduction with spice, and some food for thought at the end. Flow on, hope you've made yourself comfortable here.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaaaaaaaaa!
    welcome within the poetic extreme
    welcome from above blessing this some love
    very tyte hot write continue on !
     
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    guttapoetfromny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice

    mmm mmm mmm i was definately into this one my mouth was wide open as i read line after line go ahead gurl with your bad self
    keep doin what you do
     
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    PoeticManifesta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank yall for the love, this is a very dear scribe to me, and im glad you all like it.
     
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    Ms_MochaB Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW

    WHAT AN ARRAY OF WORDS TO DESCRIBE "THE FEAST" OF SORTS TO DESIRE MORE THAN JUST ENOUGH ... AWESOME WRITING
     
  9. PoeticManifesta

    PoeticManifesta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol....

    :eek:oops: I just saw another poem with the exact same name.. thought it was a funny quoincidence!
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow this was caliente girl. its nice to know i'm not the only one who feels this way flow on poetic
     
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