Black Poetry : The Last shall be the First

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Locust, Jul 30, 2003.

  1. Locust

    Locust Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Journey with Me
    through this black on white crime
    as i dig my black pen through this paper
    actually it's a digital war in my mind
    criminal tresspass in these muddy waters
    picture a warrior in these slave quarters
    only gat respect for Black Panthers
    my daily mission
    trying to preach to these adulterous juveniles
    trying to break these historic curse
    last shall be the first
    M.O.B. money over Babylon
    Black folks time to get ya money on
    turbulent waters
    paddle on bro thru the storm
    together we can rebuild the Black Hebrew Nation
    deep words entangled in my rich roots
    definitely a strange fruit
    calling on all troops-ante up! lace ya boots
    proverbs and psalms my kinda food
    actually that's my sword
    hit em up with all we gat
    no time to be soft yall
    gat my hand on the trigger
    and all i heard was BOOM!

    An ode to all WARriors in this 'White Man's World'
     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow...well said...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed asi stand in the battle of our struggle
    da boom of reality we face it head on today
    for our better tomorrow ...............well posed and felt
    i am ya indingo warrior from da hood
     
  4. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The last shall be first...........

    "And the Latter shall be Greater"! Hearing ya loud and clear, Locust.

    Feeling the strength and momentum of this piece.

    Much luv,
    angeli
     
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    like macho man randy savage used to say
    oooooohhhhhh yeeeeeaaaaaahhhh!!!!
    this was on point son...
    peace
    khasm
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey Locust
    the journey is not far behind
    brother in sister
    lacing them boots
    what was last
    now will be first
    Peace
     
  7. NADIA*BINTA

    NADIA*BINTA Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    powerful piece... i'm feeling ya spirit!!!... the time is now...

    peace
     
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