Black Poetry : The last day...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by serenti-poet, May 23, 2003.

  1. serenti-poet

    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I watch Brian known by his peers as B
    hug me and tell me he was glad I was his
    teacher this year.
    I watch Libby crying in her boyfriend's
    arms becuz she won't see him next year.
    I watch Mr. Anderson the flirting machine
    on the faculty whisper in Mrs.Stroud ear and
    notice they disappear into the storage room
    I guess were out of tissue.
    I watch my loving students sign
    my blackboard for the last time with
    things like i luv u and H.A.N.S. (have a nice
    summer).
    I watch the tear hit my Wizards Jersey
    dress and I wipe them away becuz a teacher
    isn't suppose to cry in front of her students.
    Or am I?

    :confused:
     
  2. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i really couldnt tell you if u could cry or not, but i know i probably would anyway lol. how old r these students?
     
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    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    most of them are 14 goin on 15 next year thanks for responding poet I'm cryin now dayum dayum dayum lol
     
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    lol its okay, let it out girl, let it out.
     
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    the only reason I'm crying is becuz their gonna be in highschool next year it's like my babies growin up lol
     
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    AWWWWWW, this was so SWEET! :)
     
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    Have a nice summer, teacher.
     
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    1 poet...I see you chaged your face Mista T! Serenti, this was a very sweet poem....
     
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    This is really nice all of your work, such a gentle spirit you have, your poetry is serene and peaceful blessings.
     
  10. serenti-poet

    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you all for taking the time to read my poem glad you liked it poet I like that face :) thank God it's finally summer I'll miss them but ya'll know how it is. peace and blessins all keep flowin :)
     
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