Black Poetry : The Lady Killer

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  1. Earthly Allure

    Earthly Allure Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The question is....
    "How many ladies can you sex and just
    leave in a single year?"
    He smiled his smile
    from ear to ear.
    A well known man
    without the
    slightest
    apprehensions or fear.
    He was delicious as
    molasses
    and
    smooth
    as sweet butter yams.
    He knew how to groove and move
    you to his rhythm and beat.
    He was the ~ish and a guarantee
    to make the ladies blood heat.
    Oh he was a 'man' among men.
    He was enterprising and a
    sex-piledriver that could make
    a saint sin.
    He knew all of the in's and out's of the
    game;
    and was well versed in making any female,
    in the heat of passion scream his name.
    But on the flip side of his
    existence,
    lies nothing more than an
    empty shell of what once was.
    He resembles a fine mansion on the outside
    while on the inside he's disease-ridden and termite
    infested, Oh, and don't forget dried up and yes,
    he has died.
    His words are polished and deliciously thick,
    even though once you've digested them and taken
    him in, you find yourself poisoned by his verbal arsenic.
    He is indeed a sight to behold,
    yet deep inside his one goal is to lock you in his deadly
    choke-hold.
    His promises of passionate love making or raw, dick-you-down-to-the-ground sex sounds so appealing,
    but never could there be a man or a word so misleading.
    When you lie down in his potent and gentle embrace;
    you may wake up with the closed end of a coffin staring you
    in the face.
    To society, he is nothing more than the Lady’s Man, a
    Mandingo and a absolute thriller,
    but to those who truly knows him;
    he's nothing more than a murderer...
    a Lady Killer.

    Copyright 2004 A.D/ "HyeKlass Publishing"
    ~Earthly Allure
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    my brutha this one slides deep and hit hard
    sho ya right , i like how u did this one to perfection
    keep flowin
     
  3. Earthly Allure

    Earthly Allure Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Much love and respect pa.
    Its a shame that men like this make it hard for
    those of us that are truly "good men."
    Its sad to say that it seems as though with the emergence
    of more and more like this, those of us that are good men are
    retreating further and further into the darkened corners; or
    making the defection into the position of a 'playa' which leads
    to a lady killer.
    ~Earthly Allure
     
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    i know da type...
    him and i used to be just alike...
    well almost...i never looked at myself like a mansion(lol)
    type piece...
    one love
    khasm
     
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    Wow...this is a real head shaker here. The lady killer is a lethal weapon for sure, really liked the way you brought this.
     
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    :grin: Ooooohhh Yes I knew him well but he grew and who I used to be is nolonger, Bro K said it right never been a mansion...LOL :huh:
     
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    Thank you both Khasm and Watiz, I appreciate the love as always. For a minute I felt that in order for me to get one of the good women, I might need to flip the script and take on that mantle, but thank goodness I belong to a God such as the one I belong too.
    ~Earthly Allure
     
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    likes this
    posed well
    flow on
     
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    Thank you angel. God bless.
    ~Earthly Allure
     
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    nice scribe:)
    wonderful indeed
    Peace
    BlueWAter:heart:
     
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