Black People : the L word

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  1. Sha'iyn

    Sha'iyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Just because somebody says "I Love You", do they mean it?
    Think about it.
    Maybe they do.
    but, only to a certain degree.
    Maybe unconditionally
    Unconditional love means you will not question me
    Only answer me
    Give me what I want and need
    So, can two people love each other unconditionally?
    There probably would'nt be a lot of communication
    Such a love is high-reaching
    and knows no limits
    Such a love wants more and more love
    L-O-V-E is E-V-O-L
    Is it really evil?
    Or is it E-V-O-Lving
    For to evolve is evil in a scietific sense
    to grow is to know
    is to change is to LIVE
    give me your eyes and ears
    NO! because that leads to my brain
    to my heart to my soul
    to my art to my craft
    you will know everything about me
    So, I can't love you unconditionally
    only to a certain degree
    feel me?
    I have to be able to talk to someone I love
    Why not?
    I'll give it a shot
    Perhaps give it a lot of time
    years and years
    It was once said by a prophet
    that "Love bends you until you are pliant..." (Khalil Gibran-the prophet)
    Love won't break you
    Fear not Love's little darts
    For as long as laughter exists
    So shall mourning and pain
    So dramatic yet vain
    They say women have a higher tolerance
    higher mind, higher brain
    what if i told you a man could have the same?
    would you believe me
    or question me
    giving fuel to my flames
    Love is on a plane
    only reached by a name
    Who? Sha'iyn
    Hussein
    Wu-Tang
    Poo tang
    You'll never know this name
    until it is given to you
    and when you search you find
    i'll give you a clue
    So miserable so lonely
    so cold at the top
    and when you get to the bottom of it
    it will be so hot
    to jot this down may strike a nerve
    but, would'nt a smart, angry person tell you
    if their feelings were hurt
    If I think
    I write
    For THe INK tells no lies
    Everything is true
    Yes, Jesus loves me
    Who loves you?
     
  2. torch

    torch Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Great posts....if you "love" anyone or vice versa then there should disagreements but in the long run it should be unconditional....conditional love is controlling love and it never works..
     
  3. Sha'iyn

    Sha'iyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HOW

    how is conditional love controlling or controllable, torch?
     
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    Goddess Auset333 Banned MEMBER

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    Beloved preious Sha'iyn::kiss2:


    Such a love wants more and more love
    L-O-V-E is E-V-O-L
    Is it really evil?
    Or is it E-V-O-Lving



    IT IS IN The (ING) continiously/continually/perpetually

    Precious are you in my head? LOL.

    Divine loving to you.:kiss2:
     
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    Kevin Ervin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Goddess, Sha'iyn does have a way of getting your head doesn't she? LOL.
     
  6. Sha'iyn

    Sha'iyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    First of all, i'm a brother. LOL
    Secondly, If I get into your head
    my works usually make sure I exit the building on a good note.
    anyway, I hope they do
    Poetry was created to persuade, penetrate and provide the reader with a piece of the writer's own mind.
    A good poet knows how to wrap it all up and make a point (or several).
    A good poet is galactically-daring but, down-to-Earth
    A good poet can say a lot with a little
    A good poet can take criticism and turn it into another thread
    A good poet is dead
    Forever trying to wake hisself through Jesus-like scripture
    Until a messiah tears down what they have written
    and a lyrical battle occurs
    that's beef
    A good poet bows out
    and eventually wins the war of words
    through the best poetry known to man...
    Silence
     
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