Black Poetry : The Kiss

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Bluewater, Jul 17, 2003.

  1. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So sweet the rhyme that has unfold
    Touch the heart and warm the soul
    Introduce a wanton feeling
    Causing heat and intimate yearning
    The bliss that is a kiss
    Gently touch my mosit lips
    Peace
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    where the soul be so i shall be also
    to feed da warmth of thou blissful
    caress in every kiss posed
    beautiful scribe sistah !
     
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    This is beautiful and it speaks with a wing.
     
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    Reminded me of a warm summer night with a good man!
    This was short and sweet and beautiful!
     
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    Hey Blue,

    This is a very sweet piece!! I like the condensity of it. Very beautiful sentiments!!

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
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    hey RICH thanks for feeling the warmth :heart:

    hey ASHANTA yes flying high on the wings :heart: thank you

    hey Sierra thank you so much, :heart: i am happy you like it.

    Peace
     
  7. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey Alizentang thank you :heart:the summer time can bring on
    added heat of the heart, loving that man :)
    Peace
     
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    A simple kiss yet so profound:spinstar:
     
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    sweet...and beautiful...
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you sister for the love:heart:
     
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