Black Poetry : ...the KISS...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LovelyGoldenOne, May 5, 2003.

  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my eyes are closed
    my body's in volition
    i'm in paradise
    from this mind blowin' transformation
    i'd daydream and imagine your sweet, pleasurable kisses
    and now i see i was far off from the real feelin'

    first let me describe the softness of your lips
    so pliable
    sexy
    and moisted
    talkin' me into ellipse
    your kiss is so tangible
    and real
    and reminiscent
    your lips surround me into a deep intuition

    just when i think that its all over
    your lips force mine to part
    my mouth readily surrenders
    i'm lovin' the feelin' you spark
    your magic wand slides deep inside my mouth
    joining me in a wet tango that's mind blowin'
    there's not doubt

    now baby let me again describe the softness of your lips
    they carry me
    bury me
    and mold me into eternal remiss
    they also give me butterflies and sweet, sexy images
    you soft kiss is amazingly far past reminiscent

    ****...it never ceases to constantly blow my mind
    sending shivers all up and down my spine
    just the thought of you and i
    alone
    makes me feel a little too high

    i just don't think you know how much change you've brought to me
    besides being drunk and addicted i'm now fully in an unwritten fantasy
    oh baby how is it you can trasform me like this?
    from ice cold isolation, to warm ecstasy and bliss
    well i won't complain, i'll just sit here and reminisce
    until the next time i can experience you mind blowin' kiss...
     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tell me if u think this is too weird or somethin'....i don't know what to think of it....and be honest!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    weird .........not at all
    it was da kiss dat beckon
    ya call of sweet lips
    a kiss of bliss
    i be lovin dis .............keep flowin'
     
  4. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awwwwwww thanks rich.......and i'm glad u don't think its weird :)
     
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    weird?!....hell no.....very tyte poem..........its the lips, specially when they look wet......ok, i think i need to take a seat.lol much love........... :)
     
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    u r blowin me....i luv the way u paint a picture of the passion for this special person....pleeze keep it coming.....luvinu
     
  7. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks alot sarcasm :) and the wet lips are just beautiful...lovely...gorgeous... ummmm.... i think i'll take a seat too... lol

    and thanks for ur compliments cypher :)
     
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