Black Poetry : The Kiss....(my kiss from my 1st date last night)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by BlatinaPoet4u, Jul 18, 2004.

  1. BlatinaPoet4u

    BlatinaPoet4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lips softer than I ever imagined, better
    than winnin first place at a beauty pageant.

    The kinda kiss that keeps you guessin, gives
    you the option of walkin away or start
    undressin.

    The kinda kiss that leaves you breathless,the
    kinda kiss that makes you wanna stay the
    night but be sure to be gone before
    breakfast.

    The kinda kiss that makes your lips quiver,
    and eventually the kiss that makes your legs
    shiver.

    The kinda kiss that makes your heart stop,and
    the kiss that brings you to the end cause
    once you pop the fun don't stop.

    :spinn: ~*Be careful wut u choose to do in life becuz sum1 may be followin ur footsteps*~ :spinn:
     
  2. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol that's a kiss......sound like a toy:lol:
    I'm diggin this flow foreal,I remember my first kiss
    Only I got a whoopin' afterwards :wave: :peace:
     
  3. BlatinaPoet4u

    BlatinaPoet4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lol thanx Sens. Believe me that kiss would've been worth a whoopin in my book! I was very pleased! :luv:
     
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    Now, that was some kind of kiss. I enjoyed this piece.
     
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    very nicely done poet love da scribe here

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    Now this is the kind of kiss I can work with...this was a good one, thanks for bringing this piece to the table.
     
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    re: Kiss

    Wow! I think everyone can remember the first date and the first kiss which
    throughout life lead to many more.
     
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    aaawe, this was so cute...

    keep it flowing poet!
     
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    Okay!! You took me back with this one. I remember my first real good kiss. Had me tingling.. OOOPS! T.M.I, huh? :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar:
     
  10. BlatinaPoet4u

    BlatinaPoet4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx for all the love ya'll!!!
     
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