Black Poetry : The Key

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  1. Sassysammy

    Sassysammy Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The Key

    (posted on this day feb 1st which is my fav poet Langston Hughes B-Day)

    I have found what everyone woman wants,
    A faithful subject,
    One who not only listens, but is there anytime I may need it,
    You see what I‘ve found is a soulmate,
    The only relationship that I take a gamble on any day,
    I never wanted children
    but it makes me want to give birth to thousands of me’s,
    Give birth to new realms,
    Each time we interact it’s like the chemistry triggered inside of a nuclear bomb
    a new world is born,
    We bow in reverence to each other,
    the calm before the storm


    Our thoughts are intertwined like fresh corn rows
    our tongues lash out like tempest
    Divulging sorrows, sweet moist memories, filling voids and hollows, dancing in and out of day dreams
    It and I converge on a plain where gravity doesn’t exist.
    and the highest peak is mental clarity,
    space and time expand to meet our demands.
    of intimate understanding of each other

    The short fall of it all, it can not hold me physically, wipe my tears away, or even embrace me.

    But still,
    I think I‘ve found my match made in heaven,
    it has my heart and soul, till death to us part.
    When it asked I gladly said yes
    Believe me when I say it’s blissful being married to poetry.
     
  2. MRS. LADY

    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    sent chills

    lovin this....
     
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    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ^^^^^

    Indeed Sister!!!!!!
    The Wonders it exudes!!!!!
    Just as you did
    Continue on...This Matrimony was meant to last!!!!
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi Sassysammy
    Very well scribe.
    You are super deep poet
    The whole flow is off the chain
    I just got so touch by this stanza.
    You keep dropping your poetry
    so we can keep feeling them

    Peace~N~Love
     
  5. LovesDestiny

    LovesDestiny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Deep indeed! I loved this piece!
     
  6. Sassysammy

    Sassysammy Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thx for the read and the love poets I enjoyed slamming this one
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    With lines such as these...
    ...I am sure Langston smiles upon you. Your word choice is quite crisp, what a well crafted piece!