Black Poetry : The Key to Me

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You have the key to me
    you own that which will unlock
    my door, my mind, my heart
    there really isn't a need to knock
    on a door to your own house
    for you are at home with me
    you abide in my spirit
    So, just relax and be free
    This castle of love was empty
    until you decided to take up residency
    Home is where my heart is,
    just use your key to me
    to carry your love across my
    threshold, feel the warmth and allow
    the flames of my hearth to consume you
    You can relax, you're at home now...
     
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    AHMOSE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for sharing with us your key. This piece is so so inspiring to me. As we enter your heart we feel your joys and your pains the substaining part of it all is we left without knowing your name....

    Thank you for sharing poet...This piece just pops out at me. :coffee:
     
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    Home sweet home...

    So very nice.
     
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    a key that only one should possess but many seek...you've penned it well poet...

    one.
     
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    Beautiful!

    at home in your heart , because "home is where the heart is", right? :shades:
    ver nice expression, thanks for sharing
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    that magic key to thy heart opens the soul to love
    this was beautiful sista Watz
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Godssoulja, some things are hard to quite put one's finger on, thank you for letting me know the reader could feel the words here brotha.
    Thank you Positivemindset. Welcome back poet.
    Dnommo, thank you for your words, much appreciated.
    Yes arthur1210, home is where the heart is. Thank you for your kind words brotha.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you brotha Rich. I appreciate you saying so poet.