Black Poetry : the jump off

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by redlady, Oct 23, 2003.

  1. redlady

    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    in the back of my mind
    i hear the jump off
    that's me and you jumpin' off
    we startin' ****
    how do i get to you?
    by sending you an email that jumps off
    it jumps off the page
    hit's you right where your senses lie
    for that moment
    i own you
    i wrap your senses around my finger
    i don't even have to hit bold
    for your senses to hold
    for your eyes to flicker across your computer screen
    make you late to a meeting
    that's power jumpin' off
    the power of suggestion
    the power of sex
    the power of my hold over you
    don't get me wrong
    it's fun to do
    you try to be strong
    instead of saying goodbye
    you say
    one
    but i've got your card hon
    you offer yourself
    and i avoid the question
    cause just for a little longer
    i want your attention
    it's time for the jump off
    cause as long as you're reading this
    that part of you...is totally mine
     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm likin' this girl:)
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!
    well now i guess ya on target
    dis was phat and smoothly pose'd
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    really like this
     
  5. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dang this is tight and good. as $$RICH$$ said, whoaaa
     
  6. Cindy

    Cindy Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :) Redlady, you a trip...
    Yeah, I liked the last two lines so much, too...
    'cause as long as you're reading this
    that part of you...is totally mine'
    Uh huh... you know it!
    :heart:
    Real.
     
  7. redlady

    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ha! you all can tell i was having fun with this one!
     
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