Black Poetry : The Judges Card

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 1poetsought, Oct 9, 2004.

  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    No optical illusion in what I write

    Just bringing the heat

    To the crowd's delight

    There's real insight

    On the judges card

    I've worked too hard

    To take a fall

    Let's get it on

    The Blackout Link,

    Remotely connecting

    The kiss of death

    Blocking detection...

    Joe Wanna Bite,

    Is out for the count

    A stinging write!

    Losing the fight,

    To brilliant light...

    Reporting the hype,

    My belts' too tight

    And still champion,

    Too good tonight!

    With that I'll say,

    Good night...



    Darryl Abdu Omari :massage:
    aka 1poetsought ~ copyright 2004
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    da knock out !
    this was butter smooth poet
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :hearthis: this was tight..dig dat flow it poet!!!
     
  4. Prizefighter16

    Prizefighter16 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was deep
    very smooth writin
    keep the flow goin
     
  5. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Pound for pound, the greatest surrogate family in the world!
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...your work gives me that good feeling
    and leaves me with a huge :D sometimes
    this was one of those works...

    Clever...
    Sage
     
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    spicybrown Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I must say...........keep the flows coming poet. I extol thou holiness:)
     
  8. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    heck naw, my bratha i was feelin that,yo flo was tight, but my favorite part was, my belt to tight
    and still champion
    ..lol

    blackluv and bp
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i see every round pound by pound ....keep flippin it deep
     
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