Black Poetry : THE IRRREVERSIBLE REACTION(REP II)

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  1. MacGeo

    MacGeo Active Member MEMBER

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    THE IRREVERSIBLE REACTION

    Like a man without a soul;
    I lay on bed as though all is lost;
    Cuz of the things i say and do;
    Ooh tongue watch thy words;

    But too late it seems;
    Now that the deed is done;
    I wish i could turn back;
    Ooh turn back the hands of time;

    Then will i do my best ;
    Never again to hurt and kill;
    Please forgive u me now;
    Though it healeth not the wounds;

    Cuz of egocentric ambitions;
    Now in melancholy i lay;
    And the prize of wickedness i pay;
    But for the many that perish;

    For in greatness and power am i drunk;
    And in the ocean of comfort i swim;
    Wearing the helmet of wealth;
    With the golden shield of money;

    Yet in the pit of ignorance i sink;
    For advice and kowledge i seek not;
    And my cup filled with pride;
    Now drawning in emptiness and flaw;

    For the seeds of wickedness i sow;
    Now the fruit of mysery i reap;
    Ooh,i wish i didn't ,but it's done;
    Yes the deed has been done;

    An irreversible reaction it seems;
    Friends i've lost,ooh no more;
    Never again will the world be mine;
    Though in it i plough;

    A stranger, ooh a passersbye am i;
    Men,now that the deed's been done;
    Please condemn me not;
    Though attrociouse and hidiouse they seem;

    Even before you do,look into my eyes deep;
    An imperfect human like you ,you'll see;
    Yes giulty am i but cast me not away;
    For all have sinned and the glory short of.

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte write this took my mental somewhere
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    indeed..a meantal went afloat with this read..
    tight flow :angel1:
     
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    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is nice....An example of life's lessons. I can dig it.
     
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    A mantra of wisdom and truth...

    you work here is intense and reflective...
    many lessons you teach of deeds and repentance
    as well as forgiveness...

    Superb scribe!
     
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    *listening & learning*
    scribe on my brotha scribe on...