Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by angelicsage, Sep 29, 2003.
ummm...nice i like it.
*sigh* my sista my sista
that i know
that you know
that I know...how you are feeling
I mean words cant describe...the combating emotions and your heart playing tug of war with your sanity...I know it all too well.
thas how i know we sistas...same feelings being played out in two different souls....bravo my sista bravo
very very nice scribe sistah
I'm feeling this poem
I'm with triniti
I third that
as i read what you speak
from across the global
the feeling so deep
that same vibe, that moves in time
that magical vibration...
yes my sistah, i know
it all to well 2..
feeling you on this
very nice indeed.
Hey Guys.....whoa, I didn't expect to get such a show of love...
I know this isn't really poetry as much as venting of feelings
I was just missing an old friend and so I let it flow from the pen
no craft to it...just spewing emotions...forgive the lack of structure
sometimes it's just important to be heard....as that someone once
Thanks all of you...mzblkangel, story, Rich, Shay, Gempis, Renee, Blue water...
sounds like you've been there...it's an emotional journey indeed...
I was blessed to meet my soul mate although,
my life with him...I'll never spend, but I do know who he is
Triniti...I know, that you know, that I completely know, that you
also know and feel my flow...yep the heart trying to control your
reason, sanity...logic and it's days like this....the heart wins...
Thanks sista, you're never shy of words.
Thanks guys for listening...sorry it wasn't really poetry, lol
by my definition anyway
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