Black Poetry : The Irony of a divided confession

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  1. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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  2. MzBlkAngel

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    i like...
    nice flow
     
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    ummm...nice i like it.
    much love,
    -story
     
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    *sigh* my sista my sista
    you know
    that i know
    that you know
    that I know...how you are feeling
    I mean words cant describe...the combating emotions and your heart playing tug of war with your sanity...I know it all too well.
    :bowdown:
    thas how i know we sistas...same feelings being played out in two different souls....bravo my sista bravo
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very very nice scribe sistah
     
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    I'm feeling this poem
    Nice Flow

    1Luv
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    I'm with triniti

    :bowdown:
     
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    I third that :bowdown:
     
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    :bowdown: yes indeed
    as i read what you speak
    that connection..
    from across the global
    the feeling so deep
    that same vibe, that moves in time
    that magical vibration...
    yes my sistah, i know
    it all to well 2..
    feeling you on this
    beautiful..wonderful
    very nice indeed.
    Peace
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Guys.....whoa, I didn't expect to get such a show of love...

    I know this isn't really poetry as much as venting of feelings
    I was just missing an old friend and so I let it flow from the pen
    no craft to it...just spewing emotions...forgive the lack of structure
    sometimes it's just important to be heard....as that someone once
    told me

    Thanks all of you...mzblkangel, story, Rich, Shay, Gempis, Renee, Blue water...
    sounds like you've been there...it's an emotional journey indeed...
    I was blessed to meet my soul mate although,
    my life with him...I'll never spend, but I do know who he is

    Triniti...I know, that you know, that I completely know, that you
    also know and feel my flow...yep the heart trying to control your
    reason, sanity...logic and it's days like this....the heart wins...
    Thanks sista, you're never shy of words.

    Thanks guys for listening...sorry it wasn't really poetry, lol
    by my definition anyway
     
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