Quiet Poetry Lounge : The iNvIsIbLe U

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  1. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Excuse me!

    Did you not see me?


    I mean…

    Am I so INVISIBLE

    You no longer see the longing in my heart

    To be with a man

    Not just any man…but

    A black man


    YES, my sistah, I see you
    The strength…the beauty …the sincerity of you

    ~ I do.

    If it wasn’t for MY LOVE
    I’d be all over you…‘Tis true
    But I thank God for MY LOVE
    Not because she keeps me from you
    But…because she fills me with so much joy
    I wouldn’t know what to do
    …with you

    But…

    Am I not woman enough

    To attract your attention…and inspire your lust

    Do I not give the impression…enough

    That I’m ALL woman…in my ways and such

    Can I not hold your eye…and stuff

    …make your mind wander…just…so much


    Please, hear me

    I’m knee deep in my love (for her)
    Overwhelmed by the wonders of her
    When she calls my name
    When she gives me the ~ Once over
    Then smiles her favor
    In her “all so erotic” flavor
    That touches me deeply

    So,
    I savor the moment
    …every moment I have…with her
    So that…when I’m not with her
    I’m fantasizing about her

    But…look at me

    Five feet ten and luscious ME

    Before I became successful…and I let ya

    You fellaz couldn’t get enough of ME


    But you’ve changed your dynamics
    Your wardrobe…and your ways
    And all of your GAMES
    …Lazy and played
    You tooted up your nose
    With a shake of your hair
    Now, you’re asking a brutha
    If he really cares

    I’m drowning in DOLLARS

    But you can’t get a dime

    (Got) a Benz (And) a House

    Not mortgaged. ALL mine

    The freshest gear from gay Paris

    Platinum.

    Ice.

    And you still don’t see ME?


    I saw a PERIPHERY-vision you
    Around…and in between loving thoughts of my Boo
    …Fading images that are PARTITIONED away
    While I get back to what I did yesterday

    With MY LOVE

    Oh! It’s like that?


    It’s just like that.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Ain't no doubt in da mind it's just like dat !!
    no other love is greater then one love of the love i got
    for the lusty beauty and vision before me is a mere morrow
    when it come to my sweetie ......Man o' man i can relate and hear ya here

    break it on down some mo !!
     
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    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    Lemme git to huh, Baller! I gotcha back, bruh!





    "Gitcho trifling, skanky, *^#@#$)%(&-self from around that man! He's gotta woman and YOU aint woman enuff to take her place!" :karate: :skillet:


    LOL!
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WE must stand up for the ones WE love...

    ...EVERYDAY. at every opportunity. that's what LOVE is all about.

    AND the river floweth.
     
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    baller:
    Luved it...Luved it...



    Much Luv
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    4EVERLUV...

    THANK YOU...for your 4EVER support...and the love you always show me.:) it's much appreciated.
     
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    Hello Baller...

    I hear you. Those are my favorite verses, its the way it should be with any man who loves his lady. And any woman who loves her man.

    Nice flow!

    feelin'itsouldeep!
    Coco:dance:
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    true...true.

    there is a scene in the movie, "bucket list," where Morgan Freeman's character is in Hong Kong. he's sitting in the bar of a hotel...and a lady approaches him. eventually, after a nice conversation about a mountain, she invites him to her room. as he's trying to find the right words to turn her down, she tells him what a lucky woman his wife is...before walking away. YES, IT WAS A MOVIE. but there are many GOOD MEN in real life...who knows where there heart lies...and aren't willing to risk losing THEIR GOOD THANG.

    THANKS for reading, Mz Butta
     
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    ooh wee, keep it coming, keep it coming. It's good to read, nice to know, that some hold on to what they've got and are not lured by temporary gratifications, that comes with so much more than they bargained for.

    Bless!
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    just as a bad cop gives all cops a bad name...

    ...one playa makes it hard for the rest of us. there are more good men than not BUT all too often, women associate the reputation of a few with that of the whole. AND, in today's society--generally speaking...as i was told by my nephew--IF YOU DON'T HAVE A LITTLE THUG IN YOU...THE WOMEN DON'T HEAR YOU. i've found that to be especially true DOWN SOUTH. nonetheless, you can even find some good ones here.:)

    WATCH OUT FOR US.
     
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