Black Poetry : THE INTRODUCTION

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  1. Leaky103

    Leaky103 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I would like to take this opportunity to introduce myself,
    I am the woman who you have loved since the age of twelve.
    However, I need to let you know I am also your worst nightmare,
    the one whom you felt your man would never dare
    step to and take a look
    because you truly thought you had him hooked
    with your beautiful long legs and flowing long hair,
    it was hard for you to vision why my way he would glare.
    Yeah, I am the ***** with the low self-esteem
    the one who with your man I plan to scheme
    and show you that even though I may not possess your outer beauty,
    he is completely at my command performing his duty.
    I think of the many times you cried upon my shoulders
    as I laughed because my plans were become bigger and bolder.
    I'm that chick who has the knowledge of basketball, football and heavyweight fights
    and as you know sports are one of man's true delights.
    Right now I am cooking his favorite meal: collards and bbq chicken
    but best believe it won't be his fingers he is only licking.
    Many warned you of my sneaky ways
    as I gave subtle hints and hungry glazes
    to your man for I always coveted everything you had
    but keep my distance because I didn't want to make you mad.
    Now, my curiosity has gotten the best of me
    as I sit here with happiness and glee
    knowing that the feelings that lies inside so deep
    has allowed me to do the unforgivable as to your man I creeped.

    (PLEASE NOTE: THIS IS NOT MY CHARACTER BUT WE DO KNOW OF SOME WOMEN WHO WOULD DO THIS IN A NY MINUTE
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yeap indeed ya right
    nice flow
     
  3. thespokesman

    thespokesman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeah
    im feeling this all the way
    ive met women who were like that
    tight flow
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ya know queen, you're right I know a few who like to creep with cats already involved. speak to it. it all needs to be told.

    blak
     
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    ya you right ...nice scribe
    i like
    Peace
    Blue :heart:
     
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    Very nice scribe...and don't worry it's always nice to write out of character sometimes! much love to you for this flow
     
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    I can vision you telling this story out loud in a coffee shop
     
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    *GULP*

    sometimes it's hard to read raw truth
    no matter how it is composed...
    we see it everyday...know it goes on
    but somehow feel embarrassed
    when it is exposed...
    and yes sister...there are a lot
    of women...and men like this...
    that are always down with OPP...
    this was a bold but tyte flow
     
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    Deep in meaning, i likes!
     
  10. Leaky103

    Leaky103 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANK YOU

    I thank everyone who responded to this raw but truthful situation. I tend to write exactly what I feel and sometimes my words have offended people in the past so I just put them into poetry and let it speak for themselves.

    Thanks!!
     
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