Black Poetry : The intro to letting U know

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  1. realeyezrealize

    realeyezrealize Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Many don't realize the fight but feel the struggle,
    Some don't come prepared uncovered and bearing their soul's
    Revelation unfold's certain mysteries
    bringing sight to that unseen.
    Now purpose the surface of our destiny

    A hope of mine to verbalize for the eyes to see,
    written stories of life's testimonies that often go unmentioned.
    In effort's that through expresson I'd be addressing the condition's of the heart
    which at times R hard to visualize
    and that reality
    comes as a common casuality with emotions it's disguise
    Now I awaken to see
    that I had been
    staling in time just trying 2 make sense and figure out exactly how to maintain above all these thing's and still live my destiny as I believe
    Refusing the boxes,
    Pyscological locks and statistical notions,
    surmounting, instead of just coping,
    cause I 'm more than what you see.
    But why don't we understand the role of man and invision the reality,
    the connection between human beings
    You and Me
    Like from another generation
    pt.1
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    speak on !
    i feel the motion moving upward
     
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    Yes I agree, I like the direction this is taking. We can be each other's building blocks. Looking forward to reading more.
     
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    This is fresh! Flow on, flow on.........
     
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    flow head on like this vibe...nicely done
     
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    this piece was much like a wave
    coming into shore...
    and when I got to the quoted stanza
    this was the crest of the wave
    coming over my mind...
    I saw a reflection of my own
    views in this piece...

    Nice work...
    can't wait for pt.1
    Sage

     
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