Black Poetry : The Intiation

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    THE INTIATION
    By Andre Austin

    Immediately when the night emerged into the heat of the desert
    Quickly the young initiate was taken blindfolded was his eyes
    Enter here this Pyramid for an awesome surprise
    Where the sun is held up, eternally stay arise

    Harps, flutes, drums sound off as trumpets
    While the ceremonies are performed
    His disrobed body stands up naked
    Naked before the wavering breeze of God’s air,
    Nude in perfected form

    The Egyptian warrior is ready to be circumscribed
    Read on the four mighty principles from the King’s scribe


    The female magician slowly applied her tools
    To the warmest parts of his middle section
    The red-hot flint knife meets his prow ness
    The excess skin is removed from the top of his erection

    As the crackling flame of the knife carved his procreation he yelled
    Water eased his pain, as a swarm of cats dashed for birds called BA
    The kindled flaming stone hurt his skin; but was good for the union of the sexes
    For the fermentation of Nun Ñ and RA ­

    (Now let the end of the ceremonies be near
    The Last of the rituals are almost here)

    Come touch this giant erect Obelisk
    Look at the top of its circumcised Triangle figuration
    It’s the surest road for enlightenment
    Bow in total reverence to the transformation

    (As his hands touched the Obelisk):

    He met a sparkling force of energy from the King’s tomb
    It’s the missing phallus of Osirus that came from Nun’s womb

    The energy of the Obelisk magnified by a thousands stars
    Transferred itself to the hands of the young initiate
    Now a corn braided wreath crowns his head
    And a Royal purple robe he shamelessly takes

    Finally the end of the ceremonies were performed
    His burning soul shines as he leaves the chariot he rides
    He’s a man now
    Find this man a bride

    By Andre Austin
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    Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome

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    Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome

    thank you for sharing this peace with us
    i almost :cry: when the red-hot flint knife met his erection
    very nice work
    thank you for joining us here
    please make yourself at home

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    OUCH! Deep piece.
    Thanks for sharing

    Poetically Turn'd Out!
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    I'm in agreement with Coco on this dog!

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