Black Poetry : The Intensity Of My Tears...

LovelyGoldenOne

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on this poem some of ya'll may think that the person is leavin' me, like breakin' up with me...but actually this is about my fiancee who lives in another state...and when he comes to visit me and leaves it a very sad time and i wanted to write about it...
so its about when we cry together...but he always comes back :)

so here it is! hope ya like it!


Deeply, my eyes bore into yours
Consistently the tears began to come forth
Filling my once waterless eyes
Holding on for dear life hoping they would not slide
Biting my lips, my tongue, my jaw
Gripping my hands so hard, that they become raw
Curling my toes to squeeze out the pain
Clasping you firmly just to keep me sane
But the tears came anyway
Crawling their way sluggishly down my face
And I begged God for another day
But all the anguish remained the same
I strived so hard to maintain the silent cry
As the hot tears gushed rapidly down my nose and my cheeks
Finally reaching my lips so that I taste bitter tears that I cried
By heart beat escalated to an extraordinary high
I felt like if God said it was so, I could readily die
And suddenly I felt such a gentle-hearted touch
Coming from the love of my man
In its warmth I felt the love so much
That I surrendered to its command
Intently my eyes bore deep into your eyes
As I abruptly notice an emotion about your usual eyes of allure
I observe that your actions are the dual things in affect
And through our saturated eyes and clammy hands we connect
Your lips form the word “baby” and me you begin to caress
I know you’ll be back and its f*uckin’ crazy
That I’m missin’ you so **** much and you haven’t even left…
 

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