Black Poetry : tHe iNsCent... warning: hot!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MissPoetik, Dec 5, 2002.

  1. MissPoetik

    MissPoetik Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    her story... :kiss:
    the aroma of the inscent curled
    and crept over his naked body
    he breathed heavily begging for air
    while I touched him yearning for more
    the clock tick- tocked
    along with the beating of his heart
    he grew second by second
    or more accurately inch by inch
    true, I was satisfied but…
    but my body called to overflow
    his hand roamed over me
    making me aware of his lust
    his desire to be deep inside me again
    and I willingly offered myself to him
    as the inscent took it’s final breath…

    his story... ;)
    the sweat had trickled down my neck
    and into the small of my back
    I stared at her trying to catch my breath
    as the smoke of the inscent smothered me
    with it’s dulcet smelling fragrance
    I could here the clock in the background
    but the scene was in slow motion
    And I can recall every moment
    my fingers wandered over her body
    as I once again became “anxious”
    yes, I’m sure she was satisfied but…
    but how could she resist?
    so I gladly accepted her
    as the inscent took it’s final breath…
     
  2. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    NICE.
    Mental visualization is the best sensation.
    I thought it was cool how you spoke on both their feelings.
    That was GENIUS.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was tyght and u took it up a notch from her to him
     
  4. MissPoetik

    MissPoetik Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you. sometimes i like to keep away from the rhyme scheme and just let it flow... ya feel?
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is definitely a flamer. this is my second read queen and it only got hotter. keep blessing the page.

    blak
     
  6. MissPoetik

    MissPoetik Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    makin' it hot...

    thanks blak... :D
     
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