Black Poetry : The inflitrator

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by That Jones Boy, Oct 16, 2006.

  1. That Jones Boy

    That Jones Boy Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    he turned up here one day seems he was looking for infammey
    many Brothas said him being here is messing up our community
    his lame know nothing presence getting some Brothas overly angry
    some of them getting so mad they near to cussing out sista Destee

    He busted in here making a hi thread claiming he came in as a friend
    but his real game his real aim became plain for all to see in the end
    quickly it became plain his concern for our suffering was just pretend

    over the oppression and suffering his kind had caused he felt no shame
    said he was a friend but in the end as stormfront his thinking was the same
    he ignored every question just spent all his time trying to shift the blame
    never has he addressed black folks concerns just complained bout some brotha calling him a nasty name.

    he came here claiming for Destee's comminity he would make a good resident
    though he cares about black pain bout as much as Amerikkkas redneck president
    it wasn't all that long before he no longer even bothered to hide
    our peoples pain was a thing he saw as something to deride

    He claimed he came here to learn claimed having symparthy for our situation
    but his thinking was clear for him making brothas mad was some kinda titalation
    looking at us fight each other the effect he had must have him in cracka elation
    why ban him if he gets to you too much stick him on ignore without hesitation.

    My people even if he is here to disrupte to cause some kind of drama
    why let his presence have the power send us into some kind of truma
    why give his ego such a boost by ova his presence making such a fuss
    spending too much time fretting over him forgetting to discuss
    Far more important issues like how to stop us killing us

    making him important by fretting over his presence
    so many giving him so much power over our essence
    why so many becoming derailled over some disrespecting cat
    would have hoped this community was way stronger than that
     
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    Omowale Jabali The Cosmic Journeyman PREMIUM MEMBER

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    :welldone:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Let this be of warning

    We Love and give praise up here poeticly
    calling names out and posting names negatively is not allowed
    :nono: :nono: :nono:
    the name was astrick out and i ask that you don't do this here
    and the N word is on our band list and not allowed
    let it be a warning for the love & peace of poetry :deal:
    Thank you in advance
    Moderator
    $R
     
  4. That Jones Boy

    That Jones Boy Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    okay duly warned re n word I only included it to reflect how the person seemed to be thinking having seen the word in some posts in less of a context I thought it would be passable in a context and wouldn't have included it otherwise.
    And so many were cussing that person out I thought naming him poetetically would not be a big deal. oops
    But yeah I understand that your trying to make sure this section is all peaceful and avoiding having one of those battleing style threads.
    So your warning is understood and respected.
    Its better anyway since the poem wasn't designed as a diss to that person its more meant to say stop letting one misguided person cause so much disruption that the true purpose of this place was disrailed and the important issues not discussed.
    Any way hope you don't mind but I edited out the arstriks and substuted the original words with less contentious ones.
    (I was also mislead by the fact you have a quiet and peaceful poerty section so I thought this was more anything goes even angry poetry section lol)
    Anyway I will remember your warning/instructions with respect if I post any other rymes.
     
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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    U were on point with this.
    :darts:
    Well done poet.
     
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    spicybrown Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    @That Jones Boy,

    I understand your frustration. Your poem stung me, really. Sometimes it's good to be able to "brush ya shoulders off" in the form of something so eloquent as poetry. Do ya thang:spinstar:

    :teach:

    :picture:


     
  7. sweettee29

    sweettee29 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whoooooooooooooa! you put it down, I SHARE YOUR SENTIMENTS HERE BROTHA ( I just had to put the caps on to tell you that)

    GOOD JOB SUGA!!!

    "TRUTH HURTS BUT AT LEAST ITS THE TRUTH"

    SWEETTEE, LOVE
     
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