Black Poetry : The Infinite Frost

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  1. Nahshon

    Nahshon Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The Infinite Frost


    She walks in darkness
    like an ocean sinking stone.
    He walks through the rain
    like the flame burning beneath his soul.

    They meet and their hearts entwine
    like locks of wooly hair.

    They learn to live off love
    becoming like the frost
    of a snow capped?mountains air.

    Frozen their love is never affected by
    passage of years.
    More sand falls through the hourglass
    passing times of loves hurtful tears.

    As their love goes on infinity is understood.
    And their love has only increased as how it only should.


    Nah'shon-Rae 12/90
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    learning together, growing old together, ...very nice
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very well posed
    this was warm and loveable man.... u took it poetically
    to a whole new stage wit dis one
    contniue to bring it like dat! bruh....
    Tyteeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!
     
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    This is excellent the flow is on time, and the wisdom of its words speak great truth.
     
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