Khasm13 : The Incubus of Impression...Interlude I

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  1. Khasm13

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    eyes clouded
    by dreams shrouded
    sanity doubted
    be me most of all
    kalil...
    i've gotten the icy chills
    from manifestations not real
    trying to build
    a life for me and my fam
    without these visions of the dammed
    my mind is spammed
    crammed and slamed
    for reasons unbeknownst to me
    there has to be
    a method behind someones madness
    an unseen spirt
    which inflicts my night fits with sadness
    in a storm of triple blackness
    i have been unable to see
    past these dreams that torture me
    could the reason be
    the ancient medicine man blood that courses through me?
    13 generations in africa
    that defended the spirit realm
    so that the earth could remain free
    is this reality?
    or just another vision in a dream?
    a hand thas grissly
    grasping me
    from a portrait barren
    with a vulgar violent delivery
    i know my wife is starting to think
    that i'm crazy
    i'm afraid to sleep
    because of the silent force that creeps
    i have to figure this out before this stress
    introduces me to the grim reap
    cause i'm already
    in too deep....
     
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    this piece coinsides with the short story that i am writting in the short story forum.each new story segment will have a poetic interlude to match...i know i'm crazy, but this is how my mind works....lol
    one love
    khasm
     
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    Khasm this is fierce!!!!! Mad Respects Mad Respects!!!!!!!! It is almost as if I were envisioning the dreams myself.... Excellent Flo
     
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    thanks nfinite...nice to see your back in da house...
    drop some son....
    one love
    khasm
     
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    Poet well u took me in
    i was in that dream wit ya.... :laugh:
    i love it have you posted this short story yet
    i love to read it.....Angel
     
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    Khas... this was def. tyte, especially after reading ur story...it made it all the better. awaitin pt.2 n interlude #2.dont keep me waitin, much love :)
     
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    indeed this was tyte can't wait to read the story in it's fullness
     
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    Is it the ancient blood of ancesters coursing thru your veins that's causes these dreams? I'm enjoying the concept and the flow. I'll have to read that short story.
     
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    That was very good and it certainly drawed me in, and in some parts I tried to get out...and couldn't.
    nice piece and surely I await the story...
     
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    Bro ya mind might be thinking outside the box but that is how great minds work , Mad flavor on thin here! :spinn:
     
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