Black Poetry : the "in between" (haiku)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by alyce, Nov 3, 2001.

  1. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ~if I was to ever give anyone any advice at all....worth giving...here it is~


    open up and love
    we're born, and we die, alone
    do it good, right now...


    Alyce (c) 2001
     
  2. James Eta

    James Eta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    and...

    if there's love at home
    do all you can to keep it
    come what may, you win :wink:

    J
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Alyce

    love whats in front of u
    before whats behind u
    leave .......gurl u talking some stuff here..:D
     
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    Hunter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    there is so much good loving and living in between...I agree with this one wholeheartedly A...

    the most sound advice I have read in a long time

    *sandwhich-meat*
     
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