Black Poetry : The Imperfect Invisible Woman

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  1. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    she was lace...
    they could see right through her...

    she was so smart...
    unwavering, unchangable, hopeless...
    some would shake their heads as she walked past,
    wondering WHAT was wrong...

    she was falling,
    hating what people called her...
    hating even more that what they
    called her was the truth...
    wondering if truth was ever wrong....

    she was sit suspended..int he dark sometymes
    crying to a God that choose to stay silent
    would he please that this away...

    Imperfect...
    that name stuck...
    yet she liked flaws
    a world without flaws makes the world a VERY boring place...
    she was dizzy...

    she wondered when she would be free...
    when they would stop shaking their heads...
    she wanted her funeral to be like Princess Diana's
    the WHOLE country was at her's...

    she wanted to be known for how many she helped,
    loved, and was there for...
    she wanted to be meek...sweet...giving....loving...
    they looked at her but did not see her...

    The Imperfect Invisible Woman...

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    nice drop
    likes the vibe
    flow on
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    o how i'm lovin this flow sweetly pose'd of da imperfect woman
     
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    thanks for the love yall
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    You are amazing, the story. How we all want to be seen for our talents and not just our flaws, another tyte piece.
     
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    very beautiful

    im loving this story its so well put together nice word play
    i really felt the message you need to right a book
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautiful flow sis :)
    Peace
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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