Black Poetry : The **** I really hate

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by shaz, Aug 27, 2002.

  1. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    U no
    What I hate
    I do not hate
    White people
    I do not hate
    Black people
    I do not even Hate
    Yellow people
    WHAT I REALLY HATE
    Is a Phuckin COWARD
    A man women boy or child
    Who lacks the scrotum to stand when it is time to stand
    And what I hate even more is a man
    Who says he is a man and still he will not stand
    ***** that *****
    What I really really hate is a man who claims to know
    The Man
    And still he is to scared to stand
    Double ***** him
    U R A worthless turd stuck to the *** of life
    B A B A
    I understand the Atheist
    For to him there is no God
    And he is all alone
    To suffer the full consequences of his actions
    But if your God watches over the sparrow
    What the Hell are you scared of
    How do you know that for such a time as this you were not created
    Do you think for a minute Rosa Parks new that her wits end
    would be the catalyst
    Of the noblest of movements
    No
    She just stood for what she believed In and the Lord took it from there
    Now I do not advocate the idiotic participation in every fight going
    But when the fight or vote comes to you and you
    Tooo scared to state your view
    ***** U
    U b**ch
    Stop cloaking yourself in the self-righteous robes of the unrighteous
    Either stand on one side or the other
    But for God’s sake man
    Just stand
    But if you don’t stand
    Then
    Move B**ch get out the way
    GET OUT THE WAY


    Sometimes rage is my muse and the idiotic use of profanity is the vehicle I choose, my apologies to those who are not amused, but my limited knowledge of the “kings English” sometimes just gets me confused when profanity I choose to refuse.
     
  2. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    shaz...jus tell it like it is. i'm lovin' it and i see what u sayin'. keep on scribin', fa showl.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man ya well felt here coz if i can't stand on my own two feet
    when tyme come and be heard then i'm nothing
    i hate them too i'm feel ya flow
     
  4. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LISTERSCRIBIN
    thanks for the encouragement I hate it when I cannot find other words but sometimes nothing else has the exact smell of profanity where profanity belongs. but I am learning and trying

    $$RICH$$
    sometimes all it takes to be a "man" (and I use the term in it's loosest of meanings) is to take a stand and state your position, and I just hate those "peace makers" who think that neutrality = dignity or Christianity
    Christ was never neutral
     
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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whoaaaaa!!!!!!!!!! this joynt was tyte to the highest power.
    the last lines maaann, made me almost jump out my seat peep..

    shaz, i see pass the profanity. i know you wouldn't "witness" this way, but sometimes we vent.
    (can't see you anyway :D)
     
  6. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    j'hiah
    you are absolutely right I would never witness this way and I was some what ashamed to mix it up like this but this is just one of those things that has shaken my faith and is a sore spot for me and obscenity is the only way to fully express my contempt for the disservice of cowards.
     
  7. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sherykah
    U know what I always say
    shoot all the neutrals (cowards) and let there gods or God sort them out, but I **** sure ain’t turning my back on em, spineless mu….. well I aruh gona let dat go (lol).
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm with J'hiah. I see the message behind
    the profanity and it comes through to the
    twenty5thpower!

    My mental is dig'n dip'n in your ink.

    Scribeit! I's readin'
    Coco :heart:
     
  9. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    coco
    thanks a million for the love glad you see through the profanity to get a sense of my insanity.
     
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