Black Poetry : The Hunter

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  1. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The Hunter

    A stunner in the hood became a hunter soars in the woods
    Like a bunter try score a runner guy hardcore could
    Shoot gun, sleazy plan easy to understand must kill
    Prey to get thrill today an ill sway of thoughts it’s his will
    Use straight approaches like great coaches try to win game
    Then aim and shoot, pollute ground with blood hunting trend lame
    Bullets could shatter of thunder a nation this matter under investigation
    He must find prey or be blind and astray, wrong data can blunders situation
    Aggression is blind just a question of time being hunter lessens the mind
    Caressing a nine is like blessing crime; ways of life is a stressing design
    Deal with wild creatures his style features stuffed deer heads
    Brother tall in coveralls roam the woods to take home goods misled
    By Sounds head turned around concerned about wet ground
    Face much as he chase and search for food try elude bounds
    Of hunger, foul strife a threat to wildlife as his dog hounds
    Rounds in a rifle astound and stifle as he pop one with a shotgun
    A squealing rabbit revealing the habit of a hunter having hot fun
    The tortoise shook and slew to be cooked as stew served for dinner
    Have a beer between deer extreme sincere about his career enters
    Jungle can’t fumble or be humble only grumble mosquitoes are
    Torpedoes they strike and bite vicious, still he loves hunting so bazaar
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This hunter has some skillz, to tempt prey his way. Keep the flow going.
     
  3. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    poetic tale of the hunter
    the vision and mental
    is clear in this here
    amazing scribe
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice drop
    likes this one
    Peace
    Angel
     
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