Black Poetry : the house of ill-repute...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by baller, Oct 21, 2001.

  1. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the music was low
    with a rhythmic beat
    beat...beat
    to the cool, autumn heat

    upon yonder table
    were meats of all kind
    mouthwatering deserts
    ...fruits
    and fine wines

    there were couples dancing
    the most decadent dances
    they were dancing
    sans clothing
    smooching
    and romancing

    there were beds all around
    in that cavernous hall
    where groups rolled
    …provocatively
    moaning their mating call

    when the eating was over
    after the dance-fest
    the mating began
    they commenced
    in earnest

    some came to watch
    others came in pairs
    most came to share
    their most intimate wares

    all came for fun
    all came to cum
    when the funning was over
    they were drenched in cum
    {they would leave with someone}

    satiated smiles
    swam cross their face
    some left
    most dozed
    but their time wasn't a waste

    when their inner strength returned
    ...their appetites grew
    they nudge a few mates
    and began anew

    arms
    insinuated

    legs
    intertwined

    moans and groans
    aplenty

    as they loved
    in kind

    mouths tasted lips
    lips
    ...the trunks of the trees
    airborne spunk
    signaling
    gigantic releases
    with
    squeals and moans
    interjected
    profusely

    riverlets of sweat
    running
    here and there
    as beating hearts pump
    let the pumper beware

    i noticed all this
    as i came
    inside
    this luscious young thing
    with beautiful thighs
    twin peaked mountains
    i dared to taste
    with the essence of her
    smeared all over my face

    as i gathered my things
    and walked to the door
    a voice at my back said
    "are you down for more?"

    i dropped all my clothing
    as i made my way
    to this caramel colored creature
    who wanted to play

    she pounced like a tiger
    protecting her cubs
    pushed me on my back
    ...proceeded to get me up

    as life flowed back
    into the joint of me
    she got up on all fours
    "make it good, baby"
    is all she said
    as i approached the great sea
    flowing with milk and honey
    continuously

    I ENVISIONED WHAT IT MUST HAVE BEEN LIKE IN SODOM AND GOMORRAH

    hmmm.
     
  2. lilchitownlady

    lilchitownlady Member MEMBER

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    You painted a very clear picture for me. Hot stuff!!!
    LiL Chi- Town Lady
     
  3. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hmmm...uhmmm, well uhh...i'm lovin' tha flo of this piece baller. very well done, dear poet. keep on scribin'...i'm still watchin'.
     
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    i shole aint wondr'n ... no more! :angel1:

    :hot: :hot: :hot:

    luv it Baller!

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  5. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Indulgence and Overindulgence

    Your point was made quite clearly, though I think the consequences will be met severely
    a practive that is so wanton, is of the decadent and depraved
    who hunger for love and only get crumbs by substituting lust
    instead. Be careful who you bed......Or you might end up dead.
    Sodom and Gommorah is a good example of people who overindulged in everything and anything their was to sample.
    If you can't be good , be careful! Peace and One Love!:eek:
     
  6. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANKS for reading me, my sistahs...

    the world is a den of many trappings...filled with SAMPLINGS of things we should avoid. I AGREE WITH YOU, msluciousb, we must show restraint, and selectivity, in our choices. we--each of us--are better than the pleasure trove that rest between our legs--man and woman. SELF CONTROL is necessary in all things.:)

    however
    as mounds of bountiful breasts
    rose up to me
    i fell victim
    to the grotesque sin
    of lust
    ...walked away from
    IN GOD WE TRUST
    and....

    hmmm.

    you see where i'm going

    THANKS FOR THE READ.
     
  7. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like the moral here...

    pleasure never pleases, just teases the brain so restrain....

    feelin it b,
    jh.
     
  8. epiphany

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    Gifted Poet...

    Baller.....you are....you are!

    Epiphany :heart:
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    J'hiah...

    we kno dat things be different than the way dey wuz back in da day...coz AIDS scare the hell outta a brutha...still, **** happens.:)

    epiphany...thanks for the love, my sistah...AND THE READ.

    One.
     
  10. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Re: THANKS for reading me, my sistahs...

    :cool:Nice to know, was worried about you for a minute. Thanks for the acknowledgement and yes we all fall prey to certain weaknesses of the flesh.
    I do believe that "A life of depravation leads to the road of excess!"Ya heard?
     
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