Khasm13 : the hero of the weirdoz....

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  1. Khasm13

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    lamping on cloud 29
    at 5:26 p.m. central standard time
    i was camping on a beat...thinking bout a rhyme
    when all of a sudden...these lil midgets busted in my flat
    smelling like some pine...running...and...scampering like rats
    when i jumped up and shouted..."chill with all of dat!"
    "if you blow up my puter imma flip yall lil punk @sses like a carny acrobat"
    thas when the dwarf elder said to me..."sorry blak...we didn't mean dat"
    "we've been chased through time by some hell spawn swine, thas why we smell like pine"
    "matter fact...what's up with that dime?"
    "if you let us relax, i'll tell you of some of our journey's
    in a ole bard's tale rhyme"
    i said, "fine...but thas a dime from the king of kynd"
    "so the story must be dope or you'll have to pay a fine"
    the elder looked then laughed...the other dwarfs chilled out
    and sat down in the lab...i grabbed...the kynd in the bag
    rolled two grape leaves then took a drag...
    a bumpy faced haggard dwarf said..."puff puff pass...yew bloody crag!"
    but later he was too tweaked to speak from the harvest at it's peak...
    now on cloud 39..the elder raised to speak
    with the ole bard's tale rhyme...a story he told with heat...

    elder
    we come from the land of boldergast
    20,000 years in the past
    we all grew up fast...cause thas the way it had to be
    in the time of might and magic you'll die tragically if your not the most hungry
    and deadly...in our land demons lurk in hollow trees
    and death sometimes lurks in the orangish breeze
    dark wizards pack spells that freeze
    and thas the reason i roll with a crew thas diez
    anywayz...on our last quest we ran across a map in a maze
    that lead to a time amulet powered off of brainwaves...
    we looted in the days and partied in the night
    we've all had the most beautifulest women in sight
    twice...and on the second time they were twice as nice
    went through the earth's ages of water then ice
    seen beasts that chased us like mice...
    but since i have the amulet and my mentals are too nice
    we always get away with a bit of extra spice
    until we stole from the upper level demon named lice
    he boiled my man gunther like cream of chicken and rice
    all because we stole his most treasured possession in a heist...
    it was....


    <crash>

    that's when a smell of sulfur possessed the lab...
    i grabbed...my backpack and notepad
    the bumpy faced dwarf caught it bad
    or at least it seemed that way...
    ish was crazy... though in a second everything was normal and ok
    but when i turned to look at my note pad...it was missing
    and so was my phat duck alert ashtray...
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    fierce words!
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    um
    stop eating late before you go to sleep brah lol
    You are a peculiar individual lol and I mean that in the most loving way LOL
    The way your brain works is a trip I tell ya lol
    And while I had fun reading and following the story... I wouldnt tell it to my nephew as a good nite story LOL
    smh
    but nonetheless props to the poet :) :read:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I could see this turning into a series, the narrative is so detailed and all. Creatively posed.
     
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    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well well the depth of your creativity and imagination are amazing. Definitely a job :welldone:
     
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    Jahari Kavi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    before I even read it, props for quoting Redman for the thread title........


    And after reading I can tell how Redman influenced you in your story....good stuff homie..........

    my most favorite part
     
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    hiphopolx Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :qqb025:Definitly diggin this
    :qqb025:HOT!!!!!
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    hahahahaha

    duck alert ashtray???

    yes i say miniseries too
     
  9. Khasm13

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    " it's da hero of the weirdoz...i hope my brain don't bust....transform into a 7-11 slurpy slush...it's da fly...my music will burn eyes twice the chemical of clorox
    then i do an autopse on four cops when my jaws drop, ock, I fidge wit my nuts alot"

    hahahaha...good peep jahari...
    thanks fam...but this one is one and dun...hence my missing notepad and my ducks...

    one love
    khasm
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    you know it's good

    when people want more

    get on your job

    lol:qqb021:
     
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