Discussion in 'Khasm13' started by Khasm13, Oct 21, 2008.
puff puff pass you bloody crab!
and the voice changeover helped the effect alot
thanks this was entertaining man
thanks for the feedback bro...lol
that image of the puff puff pass cat cracks me up on the inside...
Question... uh that part in the end where you're all "WTF"
Was that dat special effects or your voice really does go that high?
Not that it was a bad thing LOL
It was good.
I actually enjoyed it more hearing it.
Between the track in the background and the reading style and (like bro soja said) the voice changeovers (lol)
It amped the piece up several notches
My only thing was that - (and Im not being a smart butt on this one)
The lyrics seemed clearer as the voices were higher
so maybe over enunciate on your regular voice parts
since deep voices register lower chuKnowWhatIzSayinPimpin?
But yeah good sh- I mean stuff lol good stuff Brotha K
But you know that already
*taking the high road*
thank u sis for the critique...thas just what a brother needs right now...
and just 4 clarification...that was my richard pryor high voice at the end...lol
i'm glad u liked this piece...
LOL @ taking the high road
its just a joke brotha between you and Clyde imma have to start being quiet round here sheesh
Naw but on a serious note... after hearing it I think its a piece meant to be an audio
Thats what I was trying to remember to say earlier (too busy laughing at my own joke hehehe)
When I read it - there were parts that I sped read over and didnt give emphasis too
But HEARING it, again the combination of the track (which you get mad props for doing that yourself), and the vocal intonations sealed the deal on it
I dont know if you are trying to put a CD together ( I recall Destee fam asking - including my Sister Sage & her self-proclaimed KHASM FAN CLUB PREZ self lol)
But this piece is a good - interlude track yanno
its short but funny and keeps you intrested for whats to come
i was joking back with u...notice the lol at da end...
i dunno if i have the drive to make an album and try to promote it...
i think imma just keep making beats and poems and see where that goes...
seems like i neva do stuff the same way other folks do...
it's God's blessing and curse on me....lol
i miss sage...
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