Black Poetry : the hermit

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  1. midnightsson

    midnightsson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    **** it, im alone....that may never change so I should be prepared
    I’ve been feeling so down lately, there’s nothing to which it can be compared
    I even fail trying to talk to God when I pray
    I don't stay on my knees long, I don't know what to say
    I feel as if im failing on every aspect of my life
    making bad choices, regretting it, and then go back and do it twice
    I’m wasting all potential and I hate my weakness when it comes to change
    I get in weird moods that even I can't explain
    anger, regret, and suspicion are my favorite emotions now
    I’m turning into something I don’t like, and can't slow it down
    I hope I have some hope left, I’m running out of motivation
    I feel like im not even living, it's more like a life simulation
    I would welcome a new life with no hesitation, but I have to make it for myself
    and learn to be content with my son, my thoughts and my health
    material wealth is not the answer I seek
    happiness seems so close, but it's just out of reach
    I keep trying to trust people and keep getting burned
    mistakes are supposed to teach you, but what the hell am I to learn??
    that my fellow humans don’t care about **** but what’s good for them?
    that when a woman gets a real man, she doesn’t know how to treat him?
    that my chances for finding the love I sought has gotten more and more slim?
    **** it, I don't even care anymore..my numbness is returning in force
    ima be anti-social and dislike humans with no remorse
    only when I learn that someone can be trusted, will I open up a little bit
    but in my mind I feel that most people are full of ********
    even with my life so ****ed up beyond recognition
    I still try and be honest and play my position
    all a man has is his word, you know what’s, and his beliefs
    im consistent with mine, they won't change till the day I’m deceased
    I know what's wrong and I know what's right
    and I won't blur the line between the 2 no matter how dark the night

    Derrick H.
     
  2. sarcasm4eva

    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tight *** poem........n this to shall pass...keep ya head up.......much love :)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    hold ya head up forth da smile of a sunshine will cometh
    unto u like dis here ...........keep flowin'
     
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    Life is a struggle We all have to endure. You are not alone? Believe that!
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i love this...everything will get better..believe me...
     
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    In your solitude you write like gangbusters!

    1poetsought ~
     
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    midnightsson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    im not sure what a gangbuster is 1poet
     
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    Gangbuster - Someone having great impact in a positive way

    Webster's American Family Dictionary
     
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    midnightsson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx for the kind words to you all, rich i need to take a lesson in positivity so i can feel the way you seem to about things. thanx for the encouragement though, i see a tiny bit of light at the end of this tunnel, just cant stop running towards it
     
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