Black Poetry : The Heat!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by msluciousb, Jun 12, 2002.

  1. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The heat sweltering, smothering, making
    me sweat.
    Why did I come outside, the heat made me
    forget.
    Sunhats and sunglasses, thin clothes that
    barely cover the *****.
    This is what we have been waiting for.
    Long cool drinks and lazy afternoons by
    the pool, would be nice, but face it....
    It won't be happening soon.
    We are not out of school for the summer.
    Our labor continues until we take a vacation.
    And all of the sun, and heat we run from
    will suddenly bring us elation...simply because
    THE HEAT
    feels different when you are
    on vacation!

    BJS(C)2002
     
  2. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    you better stay inside

    before you get sunburn :flame: :glasses:


    :lol:

    stay cool :)

    pd
     
  3. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I wouldn't know since it has been soooo sooo long since I had a vacation but I gonna take one now.
    nice flow
     
  4. WindWalker

    WindWalker Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was a very good read!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    u know dis right !!!!!
    hell i need one so bad...
     
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